Week 11. Self Evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

I think I deserve 2 points. I included all elements of 5 classical arguments, and my research was adequate to support my argument.

2) What did you do well?

I think I did well in finding examples and using them appropriately to support my opinion. I tried to find reasonable researches for my essay. Also I tried to attract readers through common examples that we can find easily in daily lives.

 

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3) What could you have done better?

 I think I could have organized the essay better than now, and I think that my arguments lack some creativity but through some specific researches, I hope people realize something.

 

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

I think my confirmation is quite strong. I used many examples and researches to support my thesis statement and they work appropriately in the essay. To claim my opinion, I used historic articles and posts.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

I think my Refutation and Concession is the classical argument that I used the most poorly. I understood opposite arguments quite well, but I think I could not have refuted that well.

 

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? My narration is strong. I do a good job explaining the foundations of the issue, and I prepare my audience to hear my argument.

To make my second draft better, I need to check overall essay of course. But I want to correct grammar mistakes and eliminate not related sources. I want to make my second draft clearer by rewriting Refutation and Concession, and other parts which are quite poorly written.