1. The introduction
I will start asking to readers if they have ever experienced principle of majority rule in a society or a class. And then I will talk about today's state, where many singers only appeal their sexuality and appearance and students are busy with chasing trends. Then I want to remind people that it's because we follow the majority, and I will ask them if it is right.
2. The narration
I will summarize what the majority means and lots of problems due to following the majority. For example, in terms of entertainment such as music or movies, students and schools, society, I will summarize present state. Also, I will introduce a conflict between geocentric and heliocentric theory, and the truth so I could explain the motive I produce the argument.
3. The confirmation
I will talk about some examples and reasons that can support my opinion, that we should not always follow majority opinion. In three aspects - popularity in entertainment, students, examples from the past to today - , I will demonstrate why we should not always follow majority opinion. I'll show some side effects in those fields. For instance, sexuality and appearace are regarded so important that quality no longer has value. Moreover, trends among students make them unified and all the same without individuality, and there are a lot of examples that the majority was wrong throughout the history.
4. The refutation and concession
Some people say that majority opinion is better than minority opinion, and it is called 'democracy'. However, that principle only applies when the minority all agree. I will use some examples and assert my opinion strongly to the opposite which claims democracy. Also some people might say following trends is only way not to be isolated, and not to be forgotten. But people actually don't judge people with their clothes and even if someone did, he or she isn't ready to make a friend. I will add some logical reasons why I claim 'identity' and 'individuality'.
5. The summation
I will talk about again how many problems occur because of following the majority and emphasize how much the argument is important. I will provide a solution in a situation of discussion or controversy. I will especially stress a state of korean music and students, and assert my argument. I will close with advicing readers to think carefully when they make a decision.
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